Okay here I go. Attempting a little critique for you.
Firstly Ill tackle composition, I feel that the image almost works, but the figure is central, which kind of ruins the other composition of the diagonal flow you have going, i would either have it go completly diagonal, and crop the bottom and left space so it flows more, or add a few sparkles at the bottom left for it to speal more.
Secondly, the colours are awesome, i reckon you could work the background into it a little more,i think you should perhaps have some funky swirls.
Thirdly, i feel th cracking stuff at the top left leaves the viewer confused, perhaps have less broken down bits, so its clear what it is, but then have stuff coming of it, more like the main figure, which is the best part.
over all i really like it, ive always wanted to achieve something like this and you have managed it. Well done! I hope this critique helps you!
Lovely! I have always been terrible jealous of these types of manipulations. I Like how it flows frmo the focus on the girl upwards. The Circle and how it isn't really smooth is also a nice touch, I think it would have had a different vibe if it was a smooth piece. I guess the only thing I wish I could see differently is the amount of stuff around, what I am assuming, is her arm. Less is more, and maybe if you had taken some of that stuff and put it around the bottom of her. I just don't understand why it is us around her arm, seems a bit out of place. Nice piece though!
This manip is great! The colors really pop. I think there's a great direction in this as well. Although her hand near her thumb, it looks like a white, grainy outline, and I'm not sure if that was intended or not smoothed or erased out. Just my personal opinion anyways. 8)
Firstly Ill tackle composition, I feel that the image almost works, but the figure is central, which kind of ruins the other composition of the diagonal flow you have going, i would either have it go completly diagonal, and crop the bottom and left space so it flows more, or add a few sparkles at the bottom left for it to speal more.
Secondly, the colours are awesome, i reckon you could work the background into it a little more,i think you should perhaps have some funky swirls.
Thirdly, i feel th cracking stuff at the top left leaves the viewer confused, perhaps have less broken down bits, so its clear what it is, but then have stuff coming of it, more like the main figure, which is the best part.
over all i really like it, ive always wanted to achieve something like this and you have managed it. Well done! I hope this critique helps you!
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